Nope. Even if we ever get to the scary part I probably wouldn't notice. I swear he was paid by the word.
How many different ways did he think he repeatedly needed to say/describe/explain the same thing over and over and over. Pages apparently.
YES! We know you love her.
YES! We get it! You're strong and vain over it.
YES! We get that your are seeing the dream from 2 different perspectives at the same time. Current and future even though in the future you are younger. At least that's how it appears.
Your readers aren't as stupid as you seem to think they are.